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Just words (Free verse) by aliena

I write because I want to create And words are the easiest I want to create Things of utility Things of beauty But nothing I create Feels useful I can only write Write words, string them together Break them across lines Pretend it is poetry Because today I want to create Therefore I wrote I dont care if this is not useful

Ranger 15-Nov-06/6:55 AM
Fair enough. You might want line 12 to be 'because today I wanted to create' - just to keep tense consistency with the line after.




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