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Water Red (Lyric) by InWonderLand

With the summer cold and the winter warm tears shed. As the rain shines why does the sun poor water red? Im willing to lead in fact, whatever you need my friend. (and its ok we lost our way We'll choose the right road in the end) Wherever you go Im willing to follow my friend. We can sit close with old hearts broke to wipe the tears that shed. (and its ok we lost our way We'll choose the right road in the end) And all the while With tears in our eyes we'll smile Cuz we have eachother we're day dreamer friends.

Edna Sweetlove 8-Nov-06/1:03 PM
Laughably bad.




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