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The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander (Free verse) by Dovina

Into the vacant lot he drove, headlights almost caught me. Behind a car I crouched for one more wager, one less death. Through the glass I saw his eyes scan the boys and girls. Through the night I watched him, safe as hunted life affords. Curving, scanning, shining, sly, he stopped and started backing, turning ‘round, like thwarted sprite to catch me somewhere else. I watched him back and saw the boy, no more than five and standing there, unconcerned and playing, just behind the car. I knew that I should shout, but shouting springs a trap. So silently I watched and feared the thud, the fall, the bounce. Still the car kept backing, its tire like a tiger’s mouth. Guilty silence held me safe, safe as hunted life affords.

Dovina 3-Nov-06/1:32 PM
Yeah, the tiger’s mouth is vicious, but not quite right. But then, that boulder from Raiders of the Lost Ark that almost ran over Indiana Jones, isn’t either.

The silence was, in fact, guilty, but I suppose it goes without saying.




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