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Vote Goats (Other) by ALChemy

Cowards! You who cast your anonymous vote. Is your mind as empty as your comments? You are niether a critic nor are you a poet and when you do speak you spit out nonsense. I would even take a poem over a name. "My poem by Anonymous" would more than suffice. But instead you've chosen to play your game. Is there nothing else in your head but lice? It's easy to prove that you have a brain. Just say something wise and I will listen. And if you don't like it then please explain. For I will not be your pot to piss in. To those of you who took offense to this poem that I just whipped up here. I'm only trying to give you a chance to redeem yourself and make things clear. So vote on this as low as you wish but give it a reason if not a rhyme It's OK to bitch just don't be a bitch or else go back to your primordial slime.

Edna Sweetlove 29-Oct-06/4:34 AM
Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness.

So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?




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