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snot (Free verse) by fattony

last night in my nostrel i felt a clot it turned out to be a really sticky snot it took ages to remove as it was caught in the matted nose hairs

Edna Sweetlove 18-Oct-06/1:08 PM
This showed considerable promise until that 4th line.

I suggest the last line should read:

"in the matted nose hairs i clipped so short"

And you spell nostril with an "i", dearie.




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