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A Poetry Reading (Free verse) by Dovina

Hiding behind the podium, holding on for support, she strove for brazen, but got the trembles. Millions of faces stared while she undressed on the high platform. Aware of her insignificance. As silent ridicule ebbed, the blur of faces cleared, her voice felt reasonable, she saw individuals, picked out a keen old man, tried to make him laugh and marvel. But his eyes fell down, she took her seat, and never read again.

Dovina 15-Oct-06/1:23 PM
The concept of finality is a transient one, unless we’re talking about death. Everything else seems to me non-final. We can say that something has ended – a marriage, a job, college, parenthood, an amputated limb – but it has a way of resurrecting, like her decision never to read poetry again.

I had to laugh at your suggestion on “marvel and laugh,” not because it isn’t metrically better, it is, but because you hold such a high regard for meter. You are a poet, while I am a mere philosopher.




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