Hostileintent14 Oct 2006
once again edna. paint the picture perfectly (probably because you tell it like a short story), but go nowhere with it. i really have to agree with dvincent..its like a story, not a poem. is there a structure to any of your poetry??if their is, please tell me, because i would genuinely like to know.
and if you feel like telling me to get lost fine.. but fuck off from my writing too.