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The Mandarin (Free verse) by Caducus

A half peeled mandarin brought it home to me She had left me. It laid next to the ring I gave her And five years of notes I wrote her, The kind only women keep. I walked upstairs noticing the vacuum cleaner Still warm from principal And in the bedroom laid where she woke Were 13 photo frames Face down like the way she liked to be fucked, She left only one of me standing. In the picture I was being held by my Father On a beach I don’t recall But I never forgot that image, It comes to me when I’m loving Yet never when I fuck And I smell mandarins whenever I’m alone

Jack Diamond 12-Oct-06/9:58 AM
This gives me an image of a person still trying to grasp the concept of caring for another person, but still arrogant as fuck.
There are still many people like that out wondering
how things went wrong, and why.
Good sense of how the modern man is still confused about real principals.




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