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Islands (Free verse) by helenwales

The river runs through us, Between us and around us, A transparent reminder of the life we should have led, My past, your future, divided, Unique to our life only, dreamt, I stretch out my fingertips to you, But you're too busy watching the water's edge, And I'm slipping quietly towards the deep.

Ranger 10-Oct-06/2:16 AM
Figure out a fix for the stresses and the rhythm, and this could work.




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