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The Natural Course of Fear (Free verse) by half.italian

Begin by breathing in twos. Follow with a rasberry tingle. Complete only when parallel skeins run up and down.

dvincent 3-Oct-06/8:01 AM
I see what you were after and you're close. The firt line starts it off great. I remember a poem by Leanord Cohen in which there was a line describing a positive sensation as "...singing in the wires of my spine". This is something like you're after with the skeins, but in your case in a negetive way.

Dig for some other word/phrase choices on this. "crawling" under the skin? "Inching" Not sure.

poem is a good example of how important every singel word is.




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