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Going to Michigan for the weekend (Free verse) by <~>

You make it out to be more than it is. Really, it's a small place. Sounds fancier than it looks. Still, it's got to be nice to have someplace to go. Someplace with a garden and barbecue grill and some peace. We fish; we sit; we garden; we run; we swim; we relax: all the things the city steals away. For much the same reasons, I put in a pond last fall, and sit with my goldfish and a coffee or a beer, depending on the time of day. We bought it on a whim, with a windfall that came our way I dug it on my own, and the labor was the better part of me for weeks but I needed something, needed and get there whenever we can afford the time away. someone, but I can't tell you that without making it out to be more than it is.

Dovina 30-Sep-06/11:05 AM
If the indented lines are someone talking, and the non-indented lines someone else, then the two seem not conversing, but each in their own world. Either way, "someone" in the last verse, as opposed to "Someone" means to me that the person talking continues from two verses above, ignoring the other. Anyway, a nice set of thoughts on a peaceful getaway.




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