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Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) (Free verse) by Ranger
I took you there; you hated it â the steep
uncertain climes (and sloping glades of grain)
which turned from diamanté lens to drear
in clicking like an oaken farmhouse door.
-It was no stream of sun â but skewing cloud
And no-one seemed to know quite how it came
to be so dark, or why it stayed so long
The landscape threatened violence that day-
as solar flowers threw their manes around
with total disregard; the screaming slaves
in chain-gang rows. A million beating fists
would shatter stone and scatter glass in heaps
beneath your feet, along the path you trod.
You shut your eyes; it passed before you woke
I told you it had left a ribbon track-
the scent of water in an earthen pitch,
and lizards leaping like a joyful king.
But still you watched the crackling, heavy orb,
like insects passed too soon for storm or grace
an eye cast downwards â fractured morning ice
of hurricane and tempestâs broken tide.
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