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Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) (Free verse) by Ranger

I took you there; you hated it – the steep uncertain climes (and sloping glades of grain) which turned from diamanté lens to drear in clicking like an oaken farmhouse door. -It was no stream of sun – but skewing cloud And no-one seemed to know quite how it came to be so dark, or why it stayed so long The landscape threatened violence that day- as solar flowers threw their manes around with total disregard; the screaming slaves in chain-gang rows. A million beating fists would shatter stone and scatter glass in heaps beneath your feet, along the path you trod. You shut your eyes; it passed before you woke I told you it had left a ribbon track- the scent of water in an earthen pitch, and lizards leaping like a joyful king. But still you watched the crackling, heavy orb, like insects passed too soon for storm or grace an eye cast downwards – fractured morning ice of hurricane and tempest’s broken tide.

ecargo 25-Sep-06/10:04 AM
Well, Ranger--no ringing medallions and no race results--as we rounded the first island, in big surf and winds gusting to 30mph, the marine police called the race because of conditions and sent the lot of us back. But it was great fun while it lasted, and the afterparty was great. Thanks for the encouragement--no doubt I'll write something about the experience.

Lots of great kayaking in Wales, you know--some major BCU (British Canoe--Union?) centers and lots of top-class kayakers in some serious, serious water.




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