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weather poem part 7: a short, sudden gust (Senryu) by nypoet22

everyone mentions the weather, and now i must weather your mention

Ranger 18-Sep-06/6:53 AM
'Weather' works fine as a verb in the last line; I read it that way the first time round. You might want to think about making the title a little more revealing - perhaps twisting round the Oscar Wilde quote 'The only thing worse than being talked about is not being talked about' (assuming I remembered the quote correctly). Of course, you run the risk of having a title longer than the poem that way.




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