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Gone Away (Free verse) by Christof

How can I think of anyone but you? Your face, your mood, the trace of lilies; all this is remembrance. When you are dead, the grace of you will be gone not days or years. All time is calculation to make absence easier, evenings shorter, myself less alone. When I murmur 'only five days', my heart twists anti-clockwise.

Christof 12-Sep-02/5:56 AM
I should've stuck to my guns! You are absolutely right. That rhythm was a bit clunky but it worked becuase of that! Re-edit re-edit




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