poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on weather poem part 11: the muffin by nypoet22.

Ranger8 Sep 2006

The first line is class and the imagery in here is pretty unique to the subject, I think. Lines 8 and 9, although fun, seem a little...erm...simple, maybe, in comparison with the rest? The content is good there but I'd have preferred it to be rephrased. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed this :-)