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Buttocks. (Ode) by Ulterius

Right buttock Tight buttock Never smeared with shite buttock Left buttock Cleft buttock Cleanliness bereft buttock White buttocks Black buttocks Wrinkled like a sack buttocks Cold buttocks Hot buttocks Flabby, saggy old buttocks Nipped buttocks Tucked buttocks Often finger-fucked buttocks Thin buttocks Fat buttocks See-it-where-you-shat buttocks Nice buttocks Naughty buttocks Pimply and warty buttocks Lady buttocks Male buttocks Take it up the tail buttocks Comfy buttocks Bony buttocks Doggy, cat and pony buttocks Big buttocks Small buttocks I'm in love with all buttocks.

Ranger 31-Aug-06/10:06 PM
Hahaha, you've somehow managed to take a subject which I didn't think was amusing any more, plus a form which I didn't think could be effective any more and give me a hearty 6am chuckle ;-) I stumbled slightly with 'Pimply', it seemed slightly disruptive to the flow (no pun intended) but that could just have been my inexpert reading of it. Next poem of this type to be entitled '-bow'ls-'.




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