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Pane Glass Lake (Free verse) by MacFrantic

This sanctuary is where I discovered, melancholy memories of fargone fields. But where fieldside is much less lakeside, I'll so surely vanish. So come while you can, and dine with me on clouds; I'll watch you lap up reflections in the midnight fog. I'll dance with your modesty, and swim in your ecstacy. If they should design for us: they being the bestial sorcerers, then I, In my fancy, will collect you In fishing nets on the morrow.

Ranger 29-Aug-06/12:11 PM
I think 'beastial' should be 'bestial', but I could be wrong.




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