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Belong (Free verse) by creepshow

I calculate, watch and wait. I see through your hidden words, I have discovered the code between the lines of your behavior. Your infinitely cold grip on my soul is ceasing, Yet, with morbid and perverse curiosity I watch anyways, Still knowing where you go, what you do... From afar I remove myself from you, From within I tear apart the veins that connected you to me. Your dead stare is now severed from my memory, All that was, and will forever be. For now from under a knife, I own your life. I will make you aesthetic once again, My beautiful mannequin... I will once again make you belong, Belong to me.

creepshow 21-Aug-06/10:57 AM
Creepshow...yes, and thanks for the vote. My writings may be dark, but they are true emotional feelings of intensity...coming alive, and hopefully you can experience the feelings being provoked...lol.




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