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fragment (Free verse) by ecargo

And so the fall, lost past its masters’ keeping, uncounted hours, sands bleed red sky’s stain. With dawnlight rockets’ screams comes women’s weeping, Another golden hour of the reign. Turn blindly to the blare of hollow chatter, the flicker-flash of eons come undone, a thousand rockets burst in evening’s leavings, a thousand hopes lie shattered in the sun.

Ranger 1-Aug-06/12:41 AM
If 'blare' is meant as a pun, then I feel I must protest in the strongest possible way. Having been subject to his rule, I can safely say that his chatter is never empty. It is crammed to the rafters with bullshit.

Oh, and good poem ;-)




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