poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Slipping Outside (for a minute) by drnick.

Dovina26 Jul 2006

realizing some highness likely accompanied the writing of this, I'll go easy. "Falling with the devastation
of a snowflake on the ocean." is a good line, but it's not a sentence, and I don't see how it ties in. And the "sentence" above it needs a comma or something, unless my highness equals yours.