CherokeeRoseLoggins30 Jun 2006

What a lovely heartfelt tribute to a loved one. Good construction and rhyme. An excellent write. (Thumbs up)

May I make a suggestion? And no ill intent meant here. Capitalize and commas. capitalize the first word of the beginning of each verse, a comma after the first verse, a period after the second verse, etc. And capitalize your i's, as in (I close my eyes) and ill wake up (I'll) Still an excellent write. (A wink and a smile at you.)