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Non-Partisan (Free verse) by MacFrantic

A great red year ago When dying was fashionable I climbed to the top And here I'll stay until the war is over Until all the hunger And the pain ceases I'll roost quietly And dismember each reason Why our fates Are spelled in the fewest letters possible I'll wait for resolution Understanding and peace ... ... ... That's long enough I'll come down now

Caducus 2-Jun-06/6:23 AM
i feel like this sometimes, line 2 is good but it seems to be in fash every year.




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