lmp1 Jun 2006

as you may or may not know, this is a song, and i guess it kinda bluesy, but it really is faster paced. on an album entitled "Murder Ballads".

yeah, that "flow" line was tough, because the following line starts with "Like" and ends with "yellow". as you said, tough to rhyme with yellow, but i found the real challeng was to make something out of th phrase from the original quatrain. i guess the way i saw it was that you could replace "Like" with "As if" to get a sarcastic meaning and the two lines sort of work together. so:
just take it all in stride as if you aren't pretty and getting all sorts of unwanted attention.

i will have to check out "Sniper".

thanks for the comment, glad you liked.