Sunny1 Jun 2006

Ranger,
Honored at the score...once again, despite all the sloppy imperfections of original versions. Thanks for choosing to comment on a few of my poems out of the many out there that are actually good, some of the time-I never said that :0
In reference back to your persistantly knowledgable comments:
-I'll move blinked (which is definitely a verb in this line's context), to the line above, for a 'smoother ride'-you're right Ranger
-The whole dog usage...honestly...what? Please explain what you are referring to; I'm totally lost on that one
-I did get carried away like a mad woman on my white kick, thanks for pointing that out...I mean, I would hope people would tell me if I my bikini top slid off in the water & I had no clue...ya know?? Thanks for everything :)

~Sunny