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Censor (Concrete) by nentwined

ONE XXXX by X one XXXX the THOUGHTS trick -- XX le XX thro ugh my skull XXXX and DRAIN XX xxxx in to XXXXX my LIVER w he r e they are FILTERED

lmp 26-May-06/3:38 PM
cute. sorry, i know that may sound like a comment best left unsaid, but i do like it. i think you could do more with it, maybe editing a poem you have already written so there are no adjectives? and still convey the message...




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