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The Flawed Inventor (Free verse) by Caducus

I invented a pedestal it was a flawed design for she always fell landing as a mannequin. Then I dressed her how I wanted through two brown windows she saw her suitor and fell again, breaking in two. So I fixed her with my hands re-inventing her, I changed her face moulding her, to suit my dream. I invented another pedestal it was the perfect design, yet somehow she fell landing as a woman who left me still as a mannequin that left two brown windows open.

Caducus 26-May-06/1:30 AM
brown windows are the eyes of the inventor.




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