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Descendent (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Great gothic goddess birthed me. I am living terror, see. My gnashing quarrel bloodies the streets. I find joy in manic feats. For whatever end that fits my rage Hellspawn I engage. Eyes are those blackened eyes exchanged. These mouths, strange. Whatever damning, faraway curse I endure. Comes in sunlight's pure. Willing me to spell fate is my undoing A catastrophe brewing. I'll be sent oh so rapidly beneath. I'll cut my teeth. Awaiting the eternity of future sorrow. Apocalypse on the morrow.

MacFrantic 25-May-06/10:50 AM
"descendent" has double meaning. It signifies movement downward as well as the relation to ancestors. "descendant" only relates to ancestry.

Also, I was just very lazy with the punctuation. I don't even know why I bothered.

I'm glad you were displeased by the quality of this poem.
It wasn't written to your liking (thank god).




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