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Numbers add to nothing (Free verse) by Caducus

Eighth cell one man four straps thirty four years, five murders. Three syringes four guards eighteen Witnesses thirty four years - six months and four days, gone in two minutes eleven seconds. One Bible in two limp hands, One last thought 23-09-56 exodus. four tears sixteen smiles. One priest. One prayer. One day in America nothing changes.

Caducus 20-May-06/2:40 AM
Ok i just edited a new version. Let me explain why i chose to use two limp hands. It seems obvious why but in onew word it would be 'redemption' that is the notion that prisoners often self proclaim they find and get.

I may use your complete verse instead but i'm hungover to fuckery at the moment so will go back to it when jack daniels leaves my body alone.




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