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The Wife and the Spider (Free verse) by Caducus

From your lips to mine you weaved silk in cotton and a spider crawled on akimbo shadows. You screamed my name yet thought of his, your web caught me and I watched you dine on my insides from my teardrop on silk. Every lie was a strand perfectly formed; usually at weekends when guilt forced your lips on the back of my neck by the digital flicker where minutes crept, And tears fell like forgotten heroes. I thought of his drooling jaw curdling the breasts that fed our son. My wife once sang beautifully to him of mockingbirds she’d bring but she brought him a spider and a stepdad who left when the web was finsihed.

Niphredil 18-May-06/10:18 AM
This is most excellent. You hold the spider metaphor intact throughout the entire poem without either forgetting or abusing it. And you do it so beautifully! Both the execution and concept are terrific. -10-.

p.s. I think "weaved" in the second line should be "wove".




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