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For Thou (Sonnet) by MacFrantic

I shan't receive another note Not once more shall I listen To every song you've ever sung I'll say it never glistened Lest this night's repose unveils The better of our sinnings May the lilted tongue destroy What nestles in beginnings Beastly looks will pass for hate Should my love be for naught Oh how can innocence be fresh Whilst honor poorly rots?

Niphredil 9-May-06/1:19 PM
Unless I'm mistaken, the title whould rightly be "For Thee". And why the archaic title, but the usage of mundane 'ýou' in the body of the poem? How anachronistic ;-)




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