Niphredil7 May 2006

All the spelling is excellent. You'd pass a spelling checker. You should, however, fix your grammar and use of words. I'm assuming that you're not a native English speaker and therefore will point out the main lines that should be fixed:
Line 1: Nature's lap - not 'the nature'.
Line 4: "The nature did plight" - meaningless.
Line 7: Solitaire is a card game. You mean solitary.
Line 8: "Nightingale's"
Line 17: "grief", not "grieve".

Most of your lines are written Yoda-style, for instance:
"the feeling of joy I wondered how could nature in me create."
"all my tensions in got soaked"
and others. I understand that you were trying to rhyme, but rhyming should never come at the expense of clarity and correctness. Edit and post again, if you want comments.