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Freud Spoke Of A Mother's Tongue, But I Interpret Dreams (Free verse) by Ranger

Every image is disguised under normal circumstances- Now, to be extraordinary Sleep must fall like ash -blot the sky And then a strange medicine will arise, blind and blessed As if a clock-face were some lunar arc -her name is Celeste The secret is in words which murmur; while lying, prone to doubling up lithe, nearly unconscious long slumber as smoke from a gun, placed by the hip - not eyes - in grace Pupils closed, to cite... ...owl, owl of agony with a dark stare which winds upwards Owl with butterfly wings Peacock left, a gatekeeper's right To close beneath the night gale's whispering Why so soundless, vision, when carrying this message of loss? A song would be appropriate for a night bird flying Danger soaring past the scene Past walls, God, scent, Past jasmine... Awakening is like the new flame Flicker uncertainly Unconvinced Yet the owl spoke true- She left me that day

Ranger 28-Apr-06/4:05 PM
I struggled with the title a little. I wanted to incorporate the Oedipal ideas with the mother tongue (being our subconscious language rather than our conscious native language). I was also trying to fit both interpretations of the poem into the title - therefore it is supposed to show both a hypno-psychoanalytic approach to working out the meaning of the dream, which ends up with the patient walking out on the analyst (mirroring the 'Dora' case), and also the dreamer discovering that the interpretation of their dream was accurate. Maybe I should change the title to 'Freud Spoke Of A Mother's Tongue, But I Interpret Dreams'. That might make it clearer.
R.E. slips of the tongue - they are addressed even though they don't feature too prominently. It's in stanza 2.
Many thanks again for commenting, my writing's in a pretty dire state at the moment and I need the help getting back on track.




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