Sunny28 Apr 2006

I actually liked this mideival glory-theme :) You held close to your theme throughout which we all know is crucial in poetry.
Your style even echoed of old English (not true old English of course or neither of us would understand a lick of it...). Your word choice was not only smart but another compliment to the overall theme, I like that tightness you managed to pull off so well!!
I also found your stanza variation to be quite exciting & a breath of fresh air from the norm. I might have to try this spicey stanza altercation once myself!! Thanks for the read,

~Sunny