Ranger28 Apr 2006

Quite frankly this is astonishing. I haven't come across paradelles before, and although I now want to write one, to emulate this is a hugely intimidating task. This would be a solid ten but for two points:

1) the end of stanza three is slightly off
and
2) 'light what grows' isn't right. If those could be fixed I would gladly give this a ten.

Let this not detract, however, from a magnificent effort.