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ReplyTo a comment on To Err With Doves by MacFrantic.

Dovina25 Apr 2006

"clarity a surrogate to vacuity" seems a complicated thing to say. I'm not sure that it has meaning.

Verse 2 is nice, in a strange way. Doves resting on gargoyles does conjure images. Then as Verse 3 carries the image to you personally, well, I don't exactly get it, but it's strangely nice.