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one (Haiku) by Adriaan

moonlit sea fish kisses the breeze briefly one

Dovina 25-Apr-06/9:26 AM
A flying fish, I presume. If so, then good first two lines, despite the 5-7-5 sin. The third line says little, it seems.




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