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Sunday Legs (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera

Tomorrow is late coming But you in flesh High skirted strides Fool me into thinking of August When the heat folds Your hair sideways Like conch-shell swirls And the Sunday legs Of my desire Criss-cross beneath you You You are infamous The diamonds that sparkle On your throat Curtain my spinning eyes From that Sunday smile And a blouse that cuts Deep veins below your shoulders

Scarlett 20-Apr-06/12:45 PM
The first stanza had my attention and visuals in a swirl, but the ending wasn't as bold as I was looking forward to.




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