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Murder Phoenix Born (meta-villanelle) (Villanelle) by Ranger
Pitched around inside this whirling fayre
Quill-scratch scream - swift dart from lava flow
A fallen leaf turns often in the air
Thought of glory's talons in his hair
Instead - a rosy skull, a cap of woe
Pitched around inside this whirling fayre
Across the burning hills he cried 'Beware
The flash of early column light', as though
A fallen leaf turns often in the air
This small bird was cremated there
Smoke-dawn lark encircled by grim crows
Pitched around inside this whirling fayre
There gathered flocks of ashes never shared
Which would scatter like a broken stone
A fallen leaf turns often in the air
Quiet offer of a simple prayer
Arrow feathered, hewn from speckled bone
Pitched around inside this whirling fayre
A fallen leaf turns often in the air
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