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Lost and Found (Prose Poem) by annadoc

I'm lost and I'm found Differences abound; I'm weak and I'm strong to be a part, oh "to belong" I'm short and I'm tall will the last facade fall? I'm light and I'm dark the contrast is stark; I'm joy and I'm pain what is to be our gain? I sink and I swim pour the glass of gin; I lose and I win can't we all be put in? I'm lost and I'm found ... I'm losing ground I'm cruel, but I'm kind I want peace of mind.

Ranger 18-Apr-06/1:37 AM
The opposites made me think of that Meredith Brooks song, 'Bitch' ('I'm a bitch, I'm a lover, I'm a child, I'm a mother, I'm a sinner, I'm a saint, I do not feel ashamed...').
I'm not sure about there being so many questions in this, to be honest, and the couplet rhythm is very abrupt. Still, there are some good ideas in it.




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