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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ecargo 12-Apr-06/6:42 AM
Whatever, dude. It's a public board, so I don't need anyone's permission to talk about any topic, no matter who brought it up or who it's directed to. You said something I considered bullshit originally, so I cried bullshit--very politely too. I didn't realize you were so sensitive or I wouldn't have bothered to try to have a rational discussion with you. In retrospect, it was kind of like having a conversation with someone who, instead of listening to what one is actually saying, just thinks about what they're going to say next. I couldn't give a shit what you believe--that was never the point, and the idea of trying to convert you in some way or mock your beliefs bores me silly. I'll let you go back to fighting the War Against Christmas and all the rest of it. Have fun.




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