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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

Dovina 11-Apr-06/3:38 PM
I am god of a vast universe of comments, you say. It is my property because I created the cell from which it all evolved. I can look upon my creation as God did in the time of Noah, carry off what I think is good, and bring a flood to destroy the rest. Or I can let it ride, as God appears to have done for the last few thousand years. But, like God, I began this menagerie for my pleasure, and I still have faith in that possibility. In spite of the nonsense and backbiting here in my little kingdom, I still choose to let it ride.

Funny, you should mention it in this way. This evening, when the clock sounds, I plan to post something along these very lines.




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