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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 11-Apr-06/3:14 PM
An unprovoked statement against someone's belief directed at them is an attack on their beliefs. No one originally directed any statements to you until you directed statements to them.
To say the ghost pirate thing is considered a joke is to say you consider God a joke as you were comparing the two and by doing so calling me and Dovina's beliefs a joke. Whether that was your intention or not that's what you did and that is a statement against our beliefs. Admit it, you think me and Dovina are being silly for believing in God. Go ahead, I don't mind. What I do mind is coming to someone unprovoked and calling them silly. This started as a "gift" to me from Zodiac. I chose to defend my point of view as this "gift" was intended as an argument against my and Dovina's beliefs. I have that right. I was prevoked. To "joke" with someone about their belief system is just as rude as joking about someone's ancestry whether you intended it or not. I am fine with God being unessential to you. I'm even fine with people thinking God doesn't exist or even if they think God's a joke so long as they don't feel the need to go pissing on my parade. It's like your going up to a gay person saying I understand you want to be gay and that gayness can exist but gayness is silly because sex is intended for reproduction and gay sex can't do that so it's totally illogical to be gay. Then you show them by comparing them to a dog fucking a stuffed animal. If you read the actual things I've said you'd see that my views aren't that far off from yours.




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