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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ecargo 11-Apr-06/2:40 PM
Once again, out the door (gorgeous here and a beach run is calling), but before I go--yeah, I should have taken it in context. Humor is sometimes hard to convey in these little boxes and this awful font. ;) So, pax. Seriously. And I apologize for calling you smug--that was insulting.

This discussion--the scope of my part in it--is deceptive. I only place so much "faith" in logic, though I do think our progress in science is amazing. FWIW, I do believe in the importance of a spiritual life, God or no God, and I don't think that's an area that can be comprehended entirely on a logical basis. But that's a discussion for another day. ;) Have a good evening.




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