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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 11-Apr-06/1:03 PM
I could tell you that I think your great-great-great grandfather became after he died a gay ghost butt pirate and that he is the real origin of the aids virus or at least the equivilant of that. Is there a possibility it's true? sure. Am I insulting you, your intelligence and your lineage. Sure looks it. Your doing the same thing as the people who insult people who believe that aliens exist somewhere. What about mind reading? Does that exist in your book or do you compare them to pirate ghosts and pixie fairies too. I see why you believe so much in -=Dark Angel=-, you certainly carry his mentality towards others beliefs. I don't "define" God as everything that is unknowable. I've only said that maybe his proof of existence hasn't been discovered yet. Kinda like alien's proof of existence. Why do you keep twisting what I'm saying and spitting it back at me as the same insultive, patronizing rhetoric. I don't assume anything about it. If it turns out to be proved that God doesn't exist or if it turns out he looks like the God from South Park cartoons I won't Keel over from shock. What you guys did and are doing to Dovina and me is malicious and uncalled for. It's worse than those Jahova's Witnesses knocking at your door and then not going away when you ask them to(that's the only thing I regarded as silly). I've defended you guys when the preachers started preaching in your comment boxes under your poems and I'll defend Dovina's right to not be attacked for her belief system also. My God this isn't even a religious poem. I know what Occam's Razor is. I already know your response: "Yeah but what me and Zodiac are saying is entirely logical".
My response: Thanks for the insult.

p.s. I still admire you greatly. ;-D




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