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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 10-Apr-06/9:28 PM
Yeah, that's probably the entirely wrong word. I think you know what I was trying to say though. Your the wordsmith, help a fellow Irish American out here. What I mean is God may(or may not) exist on a different plain of reality that we don't quite understand yet in the same kind of way that scientist think there may be undiscovered dimensions. Then again he may be the old guy with a beard and he just chooses remain silent like in my poem and hide outside the confines of science as to allow us complete freedom to naturally come to our own conclusions. Who knows? I say believe what you need or want to believe. Whether you believe in God or not Zodiac, I still think the same about you. I still think your a good person either way.




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