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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 10-Apr-06/8:23 PM
There can be one comprehensible at this time. Just not mine. The fact that you want me to believe in the God that you can much more easily debunk is what is nuts.
This is what you said verbatim: "Yes, of course I'm using Occam's razor as an argument against God's existence." Sorry, apperantly you just pasted all that stuff for entertainment and not to prove to me God didn't exist. How did I ever misinterpret that?
Your really stuck on my usage of the word comprehend aren't you?
I mean to fully understand and observe something in a way that you can precisely define what exactly it is and be sure that there is no mistake.(I'm sure your going to think of wasting time by using God in a sentence or bringing up a Dictionary.com definition). You can comprehend the apple and even the man holding it but you can't comprehend exactly how or why it appeared out of thin air. Sure you could say he told it to appear but that really doesn't explain anything does it.
You can have theories but that doesn't mean you understand it exactly, does it? I could try to comprehend what Alaska feels like but does that mean I know for sure what it feels like? No, I can only imagine, but yes imagine is another kind of meaning for comprehension. It's just not the one I was using and I appologize for confusing you.




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