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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 10-Apr-06/7:31 PM
When I said comprehensible I meant at this time. I thought you knew that. Although it may never be comprehended. We just don't know. I don't deny the possibility that there is no god and never will. You're the one trying to offer proof that God doesn't exist. That's where this whole thing started. You even said that was what you were doing. I'd be very happy if I found out that God was simple and easily comprehensible. I don't rule out that possibility either but my guess is that if there is something so grande that it could make everything from nothing then it is likely it would be well beyond our grasp to truly understand it.




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