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The Battle of Fort Bragg (Free verse) by Dovina

I used to stand on grassy bluff of Fort Bragg’s ragged coast, observing the battlefield below— angry water versus steadfast land. Being young and full of motion, I sided with the sea. Attack was always quenched back then by strength of solid rock. Still I cheered the young and angry sea, and still it pounded. After many battles passed, some broken rocks, a lot of motion, I came again to grassy bluff, and looked from different view. Now memory moved, met solid desire, armies under different flags. Where before the rock was winning, the sea was breaking through. Gentle rolls still swelled in shallows near the shore, then toppled hard against the cliff. Resistance waned in longer view, Some rocks had slid away. Memory kept rolling in, breaking stone, dissolving need, taking it off in painful bits to spread beneath the sea.

ALChemy 10-Apr-06/3:04 AM
I know what you're saying and I'm perfectly fine with it. You're saying you'd rather say some force that we don't know about started everything than say it was a being. What I'm saying is that "I don't know" is the only correct way to respond and that the answers shown above are just as likely at this point. So it's anyone's guess. If a tree falls over then you could say the wind blew it over or God had a hand in it. You can disprove the wind theory but even if you prove the wind theory then you still haven't ruled out God having a hand in it. You could say the flap of one specific butterfly wing caused the chain of events which resulted in the wind that blew over the tree. Can you prove it? No. Is it wrong because you can't prove it? No. Is it easier to just stick with what you already know? Sure, but we'd still be like the middle ages if did that. Just don't assume things don't exist because at this point it seems unlikely. Some of the best scientific discoveries seemed unlikely at the time.




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