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The One (Free verse) by deval1516

I have found someone, And he might be the one. He dosent know, But it will show. The way I felt, Made my heart melt. He is so fine, He blows my mind. He is so cute, Hes hard to boot. If he breaks my heart, I will fall apart. Is he the one, or another somone.

Dovina 9-Apr-06/7:48 PM
Like a diary entry. Nothing wrong with the feelings you have, just that they are not expressed so as to be interesting to anyone who is not poersonally involved with the situation.




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